Vancia, there are some thoughtful reflections here on your research and planning skills and how they've developed. You are particularly clear on the role of case studies / real media products. You give a detailed account of how you overcame and resolved logistical issues. You could make more reference to documents that helped you organise this, such as release forms, recces etc. You could also be clearer on how this compared to AS. Add some more visuals- embedded video, pictures etc.
Vancia, there are some thoughtful reflections here on your research and planning skills and how they've developed. You are particularly clear on the role of case studies / real media products. You give a detailed account of how you overcame and resolved logistical issues. You could make more reference to documents that helped you organise this, such as release forms, recces etc. You could also be clearer on how this compared to AS. Add some more visuals- embedded video, pictures etc.
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